The flash went off.
Jaqueline felt her partner, Maxwell, relax. She relaxed as well, running her fingers through her hair self-conciously. She hadn't done much modeling- it was only because of Max and his father that she was doing it at all.
"It's getting late," Max's father remarked, stepping away from the camera.
"Perhaps I should be getting home, my father will wonder what has b ecome of me." Jacqueline said, her black beret on an angle over her loose brown curls.
"I'll walk you home," Maxwell said, putting an arm around her waist.
"A fine boy I've raised. Fancy that, Jacqueline, I don't even have to tell him to wlak you home anymore!" Max's father laughed heartily. The children laughed too, and Max seemed to blush, his unruly brown curls falling in his eyes.
"Shall we?" he asked. Jacqueline nodded, smiling. She loved Max. They were best friends. Their parents had been childhood friends, and has made sure that Jaqueline and Max's younger sister Rowina were best friends. That was how she had come to know Max. max lead her to the door, lacing his fingers between hers as soon as the door was shut. She blushed deeply, thankful it was dark; she didn't know Max shared her feelings.
"It's too bad your house is so close," he murmured. "I like walking you home." Jacqueline smiled, looking up at him.
"I like it, too," she said quietly. Max chuckled, stepping onto the dirt path and into the woods. Jacqueline followed him, familiar with these woods. She had often played in them with Rowina when they were both little. These woods seperated Jacqueline's house from Max's.
They walked in silence, but something was following them. Something dark and sinister. The full moon shone through the deep emerald canopy and down on the couple. It dappled the dirt path they followed, the leaves of fall blowing in the slight autumn breeze.
There was a rustle in the bushes next to Jacqueline. She breathed in sharply, pressing closer to Max. He chuckled, squeezing her hand lightly.
"It's alright, sweetheart, just a rabbit," Max said in a soothing voice. Nonetheless, she pressed closer to him, scared. Max was alert, his eyes searching the shadows. He wished he'd brought his knife, however silly a comfort it was.
Before they knew it, it was upon them, teeth snapping and snarls ripping from it's throat. There was only one terrified scream, and then the forest was silent.
All of the ideas and characters mentioned in this text are protected by copyright law and belong to me. This may not be duplicated without my written consent. Hallow's City and all related ideas are (c) me. Do not steal. I will find you if you do.
Hello
Well now that you know who the people in the pictures are, let me just say, hello and welcome to the blog of my story, Hallow's City. Not my story personally, just one I'm writing, for all those who I know will take it dead seriously. :) It's constantly changing and evolving, making itself better and different based on things I come up with daily and try to cram in. Just so you know, unfortunately, many of my ideas are not compatable with the story, no matter how much I wish they were. School is back in session, so I'm insanely busy. I'll try to get it all typed up, but my parents want to see some of me too. :) Chapter 6 should be up soon. I hope you enjoy Hallow's City!!! If only it was real, I would totally go there.
Here's a little insight. I modeled the characters after some of my friends- in appearance, not necessarily personality. Thanatos doesn't actually exist as a person I modeled him after. Salex does. Seeing these walking, talking people, whether they know it or not, I feel like I'm talking with my characters. Maybe that's a little weird, but you gotta be weird to write a book like this, right? ;)
Enjoy Hallow's City- I hope you have as much fun reading it as I did writing it. Maybe it will even keep you on the edge of your seat. The lowest I can hope for is that it surpasses Twilight. Yes, I have read all four books and the novella. The novella mainly out of curiosity. Yes I've read the host. I am not a Twitard. At least I took the time to make mine scientific.(you'll get it later)
Here's a little insight. I modeled the characters after some of my friends- in appearance, not necessarily personality. Thanatos doesn't actually exist as a person I modeled him after. Salex does. Seeing these walking, talking people, whether they know it or not, I feel like I'm talking with my characters. Maybe that's a little weird, but you gotta be weird to write a book like this, right? ;)
Enjoy Hallow's City- I hope you have as much fun reading it as I did writing it. Maybe it will even keep you on the edge of your seat. The lowest I can hope for is that it surpasses Twilight. Yes, I have read all four books and the novella. The novella mainly out of curiosity. Yes I've read the host. I am not a Twitard. At least I took the time to make mine scientific.(you'll get it later)
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